Sunday, November 30, 2008

Mysterious Fiery

Crashing into the ground with no force
No marks left to see

Silence speaks words
If you choose to listen
The answers lie there waiting
Visible if you open your eyes

Sounds create symphonies most ignore
Offering peace to those who listen

Overlooked by rushing life
Forced aside and forgotten

Feel everything, the good the bad
See the truth and speaks those words clearly
Hear the secrets floating around you

The beauty in the unknown
The beauty in you
Here and now

2 comments:

Michael said...

I don't really have much to say after reading your post, but I like it. I just want you to know that I've read everything you've published here and that I believe I've followed a very talented and intriguing poet. I apologize for not having much opinion about this poem itself, but the poem is acknowledged and very much adored by me. :)

Michael.

Carrie Amie said...

Wow. Thank you very much Michael. This whole blog experience has been the first time I have shared my writing with a large audience. I am inspired to continue and really appreciate all the people that follow what I post. Thank you :)