Sunday, November 2, 2008
Rewriting a sentence
Rewriting this sentence: “Casually he told her he loved her”
Smiling he looked deep into her soul and kissed her
Starring into her eyes he took he hand and gently kissed her
Deeply looking into her eyes he gently took her hand and kissed it.
He smiled looking deep into her eyes moved closer and kissed her.
Smiling he looked deep into her soul and kissed her.
He gracefully turned to her, smiling he kissed her soft lips
Tuning to face her he smiled and kissed her sweet soft lips
He kissed her with a smile
With a wink of his eye he gently kissed her
Glowing he turned and kissed her
Savoring the moment he kissed her gently
Whats your favorite?