Thursday, November 13, 2008

A little more jaded than before

Stepping forward
Two steps backwards

Racing thoughts
Keep her still

An allusion
A dream
Bewildered
Numb
Gone

Wanting hope
But giving up

Near you
So far away

Pushing away moments that once were
Searching for something
Lost more than ever

It happened again
Why have faith

Can’t find her way
The paths gone

Her minds just not working properly
Building a fortress for her heart- stronger than before
Jaded

6 comments:

Sherri Watt said...

I like your writing. You have talent. It tugged at my heart because it all seemed to reveal such sadness and I have been there. But I did finally find healing and joy from a relationship with Jesus Christ. HUGS! Sherri

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Carrie Amie said...

Thank you for your comment.

xyn said...

nice one.=)

xXLeaXx said...

I like it a lot! Your works are so nice. You rock! I'm a big fan of yours.

Carrie Amie said...

Thank you for your kind words, it inspires me to write more :) I really appreciate it!

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