Wednesday, October 22, 2008

Wishful Thinking

I can not judge you based on one moment
that is not who you are.
One situation does not define you
that is not who you are.
A glimpse of your demons
doesn’t make you a bad person.
I know who you are
When did you forget?

9 comments:

Chickadee said...

There's something in your writings that I can identify with. Very well done.

MilesPerHour said...

I just stopped by your blog today. My girlfriend who is a writer syas she does her best when she writes for herself. I agree. As a musician I write songs for myself and if other people like them great. If not it doesn't mean I have no talent. The same goes for you, and you do have talent!

Argentum Vulgaris said...

Nice poetry, make it more attractive for people to stop and read, an assocites picture or cartoon always helps.

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jessica said...

So much said with little words, I love it! It's also very true. There's a lot more to us than what we do or say :)

Carrie Amie said...

Thank you all for your comments and taking the time to read my stuff. I was nervous about doing this but now I am just blow away with the responses I have been getting :) I will post more soon...

random thoughts from a random person said...

This is amazing!! Wealth of meaning in such few words...thats what poetry is all about!!

Carrie Amie said...

I am surprised with the response to this one, I have it written out in big jiffy and place up on my wall. I think that it describes so many different situations.
Thanks for the comments!

hrix said...

nice one.

Carrie Amie said...

Thank you :)