Wednesday, October 22, 2008


Like a boulder I stood
Supporting your every move
I could see your struggle, your hidden battle
So I stayed as your support
My heart open and wounded

Taking no notice of this your proceeded carelessly
How can you be so naive and yet so aware of your actions?

You’ve hurt me without knowing it, one too many times
You don’t and haven’t realized what you have done

Instead it seems I am easily erased
All good deeds, support and care forgotten

So as I leave I tell you this
One day you will see what you have done
It will pain you as it has pained me
But take comfort in knowing I forgive you
For it was me guiding you
You were too blind to see


samiyr said...

I really liked your poem, it was pretty deep. You definatly have talent.

Carrie Amie said...

Thank you.