Each_Step_Planned_Out
Over thought and analyzed
Organized meticulously
Decisions strategically manicured
And just like that, the glass shatters
Reality ruptures, mind snaps, followed with illogical actions
Cruel words come rushing though a dam now fractured
Flooding to, searching for, bystanders in the way
Relentless and shocking storms hit hard
Radiating from her body
Heart beat rages, body heats
Relief comes as the flood finally reaches her eyes
Broken, realizing what damage has been done
Bowing her head, ashamed, devastated
A control much harder to plan
17 comments:
very interesting blog :)
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anger can bring on some very creative writing, thanks for your comments :)
Interesting indeed, curious to read more
Beautiful poem. Very honest and personal. I can relate to it and that's why I'm going to follow your blog if thats ok :) Totally agree with the anger and creative writing comment. My poems are usually written when I'm angry or sad. Can't wait to read the rest :)
u're right, anger or just hurt can bring a lot of creativity. love ur blog! :)
I like the way your thoughts flow....but what caught me is the similarity in usage of words when I write....infact one of my blog is named - unrestrained spontaneity..... and also the fact that I have been penning down a novel ....not even halfway through ...but I am sure I 'll finish it one fine day ...:)....Keep writing ....all the best ....
Just came across you blog. Well written :)-
~~Good winds~~
The strong winds always arrive...
good one...
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Browsing around trying to find like minded "journeyers" to network with. I found many of my thoughts expressed through your words.
I also process best through words and express myself best through music.
I'll continue to read, glean and comment. I'd love for you to visit me and do the same. My blog "The Music In My Heart" is at ellesmusic.blogspot.com
have a great one!!
Awesome write. I write poetry as well and I've written two books. Good luck!!
Nice poety!!!
That's all true. I'm just in shock. I think you're a very mature person.
And I like your way to reason. It's a pity that I am too young to understand some of your thoughts too complicated for me.
Bye!
I just so happened to come across your blog via the Next Blog>> Button and every once in awhile it uncovers a gem(: I'm excited to read more!
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