Monday, March 21, 2011

Unrestrained Thoughts

Each_Step_Planned_Out
Over thought and analyzed
Organized meticulously
Decisions strategically manicured

And just like that, the glass shatters
Reality ruptures, mind snaps, followed with illogical actions

Cruel words come rushing though a dam now fractured
Flooding to, searching for, bystanders in the way

Relentless and shocking storms hit hard
Radiating from her body
Heart beat rages, body heats

Relief comes as the flood finally reaches her eyes
Broken, realizing what damage has been done

Bowing her head, ashamed, devastated
A control much harder to plan

20 comments:

kungfudonut said...

very interesting blog :)

Anonymous said...

raw

Carrie Amie said...

anger can bring on some very creative writing, thanks for your comments :)

Anonymous said...

Interesting indeed, curious to read more

Megan said...

Beautiful poem. Very honest and personal. I can relate to it and that's why I'm going to follow your blog if thats ok :) Totally agree with the anger and creative writing comment. My poems are usually written when I'm angry or sad. Can't wait to read the rest :)

Devika said...

u're right, anger or just hurt can bring a lot of creativity. love ur blog! :)

Vandana said...

I like the way your thoughts flow....but what caught me is the similarity in usage of words when I write....infact one of my blog is named - unrestrained spontaneity..... and also the fact that I have been penning down a novel ....not even halfway through ...but I am sure I 'll finish it one fine day ...:)....Keep writing ....all the best ....

Calvin Pereira said...

Just came across you blog. Well written :)-

Miah said...

~~Good winds~~
The strong winds always arrive...

Dona Dey said...

good one...

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Elle Laine said...

Browsing around trying to find like minded "journeyers" to network with. I found many of my thoughts expressed through your words.
I also process best through words and express myself best through music.
I'll continue to read, glean and comment. I'd love for you to visit me and do the same. My blog "The Music In My Heart" is at ellesmusic.blogspot.com
have a great one!!

Christina Strigas said...

Awesome write. I write poetry as well and I've written two books. Good luck!!

Levonne said...

Nice poety!!!

That Girl said...

That's all true. I'm just in shock. I think you're a very mature person.
And I like your way to reason. It's a pity that I am too young to understand some of your thoughts too complicated for me.
Bye!

Stephanie said...

I just so happened to come across your blog via the Next Blog>> Button and every once in awhile it uncovers a gem(: I'm excited to read more!

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