Monday, June 28, 2010


As I step back my wall slowly appears in front of me
All too familiar
I watch it grow as the block breaks the path between you and I

You’ve done it now, there’s no turning back
Stepping tippy toed, taking a glimpse of a power you once held so ignorantly

Sad thing is, you don’t even know
I’ve captured you already
Just wait and see
It will become clear, when time decides

The tricky things is
My heart moves on, not held in one place
My peace has been said

Yours is stuck, you’ll feel it soon
As you shut out the panics of your mind and finally hear your heart

It will all come undone for us see
Hidden between the two

Learn from it now,
Don’t let me be.


Manic Chef said...

Perhaps it's mere projection, but I really enjoyed the embittered overtone of this piece. Thank you for sharing. =)

Sidebar response to your profile commentary: I am stuck on page 83. =)

Carrie Amie said...

Nope, you got it.

I have a few more pages now. Gonna try to write a bunch this summer. one day the novel will be day

Thanks for your comment, keep writing!