Tuesday, February 23, 2010

Ridged Solution

A fairy tale façade chips away as piece-by-piece reality takes stage.
I crumble inside holding together the parts of me force apart and heading in different directions.
Inspirations left me falling into something so liquid

Giving up the things I love
I’ve lost a part of me from there to here

Completing a circle I find myself where I once was before.
Torn between him and a dream of you.


Unconquerable Dreamer said...

Enjoyed this one quite a bit. I like your style of thoughts-in-poems. I can hear the thoughts as they come to you. Very natural, very raw.

Carrie Amie said...

Thank you. It's interesting when you put thoughts to paper without over thinking. I find that if I look back at my poems they always tell me something about what will happen or what is about to happen in my life, that is if I choose to listen. I should really take my own adivce sometimes.