Saturday, November 14, 2009

strangled simles

Pushing together strangled smiles
The world distorts the truth around me
Hidden words spewing from everyone, hit me like razors
targeting my heart

5 comments:

A.J.Johnson said...

Interesting words...well done.

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Carrie Amie said...

Thank you both. I really like the title of this one.

LONE WOLF said...

Carrie Amie - From Canada, this was awesome, short & to the point. I appreciate your writings, I'm afraid to post mine out there on the Web. Sure, I spew some anger on MySpace & FaceBook, but I appear to only be a rambling idiot. I want to share deeper things like you do on this Blog, but am afraid of the fallout.

Peace to ya' Lil-Sis. . .
-Lone Wolf

Carrie Amie said...

Lone Wolf, I suggest you put your fingers to your key board type away and post them. Create a profile that no one knows about and see what happens. If I am right you'll be amazed at the response. Trust in yourself and your ability and release your words to the unknown community of bloggers. Then when you are ready, let your friends know about your blog.
Best of luck with your writings!