Sunday, November 2, 2008
Rewriting a sentence
Rewriting this sentence: “Casually he told her he loved her”
Smiling he looked deep into her soul and kissed her
Starring into her eyes he took he hand and gently kissed her
Deeply looking into her eyes he gently took her hand and kissed it.
He smiled looking deep into her eyes moved closer and kissed her.
Smiling he looked deep into her soul and kissed her.
He gracefully turned to her, smiling he kissed her soft lips
Tuning to face her he smiled and kissed her sweet soft lips
He kissed her with a smile
With a wink of his eye he gently kissed her
Glowing he turned and kissed her
Savoring the moment he kissed her gently
Whats your favorite?
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He gracefully turned to her, smiling he kissed her soft lips.
so sweet.. :D just like in asian soaps
may i ask you, do you use the snowflake method in writing?
Thanks...
May I ask what is the snowflake method? I might...
snowflake method is when you first create the most basic details as to get the whole picture, and then gradually expand the thought. for more details see this site
http://www.writetoinspire.com/article1258.html
i'm trying this but i'm itching to start right away.. haha! i just made a pretty messy rough draft of my chapters and began writing. but i lessen the details so that i could finish more easily. i'll just expand it later.
um I guess in a way I do. I usually just start writing and keep going until I find my self stopping too often... then I stop and go over it. Adding more detail. The detail definately comes into play later on.
I am curious to see your stuff :)
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