These are some of my attempts... still not sure that I got it.
Take 1:
Virgin land untouched
Pure green surroundings
Slowly falls apart
Take 2:
A virgin landscape
Tainted, greedy wants and needs
Disposed nothingness
Take 3:
A virgin landscape
Now tainted by greedy hands
Disposed emptiness
Take 4:
Our virgin landscapes
Now tainted by dirty hands
Take 5
Our virgin landscapes
Now tainted by corrupt minds
Emptiness remains
Take 6
Virgin land untouched
Now clear cut devastation
It’s gone forever
Take 7
Virgin land untouched
Everywhere devastation
It’s gone forever
2 comments:
haiku! hey, but why does the fourth verse only have two lines?
Right!
Cause it started out as a haiku but then I didn't like where it was going so then I was just playing with words :)
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