tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3872015700624569338.post5154596864946609875..comments2023-10-03T04:37:56.920-07:00Comments on My thoughts, poems and short stories: Break AwayCarrie Amiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05186460130342723688noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3872015700624569338.post-64123669743434419652008-10-29T06:48:00.000-07:002008-10-29T06:48:00.000-07:00Thanks!I find it interesting to try and figure out...Thanks!<BR/>I find it interesting to try and figure out why people act/ do what they do, when some times, willing to admit it or not, they should be doing the exact opposite.Carrie Amiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05186460130342723688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3872015700624569338.post-38993542778584818752008-10-29T00:57:00.000-07:002008-10-29T00:57:00.000-07:00many times i feel the same way too. it's hard to r...many times i feel the same way too. it's hard to resist when people, even by subtle means, push you to do something you actually do not want to do (well, i guess it depends upon the person).. at times, i succumb to this pressure too. i like this poem - i am relating to it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3872015700624569338.post-56359759703798533832008-10-24T13:39:00.000-07:002008-10-24T13:39:00.000-07:00You got it bang on! Striving for perfection yet fe...You got it bang on! <BR/><BR/>Striving for perfection yet feeling so broken inside she wants to escape and make a change but feels too loyal to her commitments in life... So she goes through the motions of each day as an obedient slave meanwhile the pressure builds.<BR/><BR/>Thanks for your comment, it's nice to see that the meaning behind the poem is visible to others :)Carrie Amiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05186460130342723688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3872015700624569338.post-80716396524021447912008-10-24T07:36:00.000-07:002008-10-24T07:36:00.000-07:00Is it the pressure of pursuing perfection, which d...Is it the pressure of pursuing perfection, which doesn't exist? Is she just hiding her pain from the world? Does she know how to think for herself?<BR/><BR/>I like your poetry :) keep writing!DragonRaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04575972727590566713noreply@blogger.com